“Open the box.” It wasn’t a request, it was a demand. And one I could not afford to ignore or question. I reached out and picked up the box and stood for a moment with it in my hands. “Open the box.” The demand rang out again. I looked down at the box; it was a plain brown box with a wide purple ribbon tied around it. It almost looked like a Christmas present. But that was impossible. And I knew it; Christmas didn’t exist here. “Open the box.” The demand would not go away until I obeyed it. I couldn’t refuse but I couldn’t obey. “Open the box.” I was in trouble and they knew it. I lifted the box to look underneath it. The ribbon didn’t have a beginning or an end. It was like it was part of the brown box. I frowned. I turned the box around looking for some sort of opening that I could use as a peephole to see what was inside. “Open the box.” I vaguely wondered how long they would wait for me to open the box. I continued to turn the box around. There were no seams, no taped flaps; the box was a solid piece with the wide purple ribbon wrapped around it with no seams or un-tieable bows. I shook my head and looked in front of me with an eyebrow raised. “Open the box McConnell.” I began to shake. I can’t. I put my ear up to the box but there was no sound, nothing shifted, nothing ticked, nothing rattled, nothing crinkled, nothing happened. I looked back up. I started to put the box down on the floor. “OPEN THE BOX.” The demand blasted through the room and shook the walls. I gasped and put my hands and the box over my ears. I took my hands and the box away from my ears. Silence. My ears were ringing and I began to tremble violently. I shook the box. Nothing. It felt heavy though. It weighed in my hands like sin. “Open the box.” I looked up and opened my mouth. A screeching noise resounded in the room. I put my hands and the box up to cover my ears again. The screeching noise grew louder. I looked over in amazement at my hand. The box was making a noise. I shut my mouth. The noise stopped. “Open the box.” I shook the box violently. Nothing. I opened my mouth again as if to say something. The screeching started again. I put my ear up to the box. The screeching continued. But nothing shifted inside the box. I closed my mouth. Silence. “Open the box.” I shook my head. “Open the box.” I tried to untie the bow on top but it was like trying to untie your shoelaces when your fingers are frozen. I tried to pull the seamless ribbon away from the box but that was like separating a five-year-old from a piece of candy. I tried to tear through the un-ribboned sides of the box. It seemed to give a little under my fingernails. “Open the box.” I dug in harder. My fingernails began to splinter. I felt blood on my fingertips. But the box was giving under the pressure. I continued to dig and scratch and claw and bleed at it. A piece of the box came peeling off and fell on the floor. “Open the box.” I bent down and picked it up. It had the color of cardboard but it didn’t look like cardboard. “Open the box.” I tore my eyes away from the piece of the box and looked at the portion of the box that I had been clawing at. It pulsed. I shivered and reached out my hand toward the dying portion of box. I touched it and gritted my teeth. It felt like flesh. I closed my eyes and began to claw again. “Open the box.” My clawing grew desperate. I moaned softly as more pieces of the box peeled off and fell to the floor. The screeching sound made a small appearance, then subsided. I continued to claw. The box was coming apart. “Open the box.” My fingers suddenly met with no resistance. I opened my eyes, there was a small hole in the box. The ribbon had turned black. The box was no longer brown but a bright, sickly red color. I shuddered and put a finger in the hole and pulled. The box opened and a bright white light spilled out. I screamed and the world ended.
Open the Box
February 17, 2010
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Hello dear! I’ve read both versions of this story and to be honest, I’m absolutely in love with this one. Maybe that’s because it has the word “silence” in it. Haha, but honestly this is beautiful, dark, thoughtful, and very open to interpretation I believe, and I wanted to let you know that it’s quite awesome. :) if you wouldn’t mind, I’d like to write a short piece on the same prompt, and see what comes out of it. I think it could be interesting. Looking forward to more stories! -Silence
Silence,
This was definitely the funner one for me to write, the other one was sort of a half-formed idea that I probably should have waited a little longer to write but it was fun to work at mirroring certain elements of the stories! Yeah this one is definitely more enigmatic! Feel free to take the prompt, let me know what comes from it for you. :) Thanks!
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